Thursday, 29 September 2016

Lady Mary 1

Title: Lady Mary 1 “As an actor”
Word Count: 200 words (minimum)
As an actor how would you show your role as one of Lady Mary’s friends to an audience?
In your answer you should refer to:
• Who your character was;
• How your character felt;
• Voice;
• Movement;
Give reasons for your answer
Lady Mary 1 “as an actor”


Hi I’m Lady Mary’s brother and recently she got engaged with this weird man who calls himself Mr Fox. No one knows nothing about him and Mary doesn’t know much about him either. She says he lives in a castle but the strange thing is that there are no castles near here. She doesn’t even know how old he is. I’m sure he has to be lying about his identity. They have only been together for a week now and they met in the local pub. Apparently he’s had about five wives before and they all died in tragic accidents. There’s just something about this guy I don’t trust, even though she seems to think he’s perfectly normal. She’s not been in a relationship for about five years now, and I really think she’s rushing into this. She’s only seen him twice now and both times they have bumped into each other at the pub. I mean she doesn’t even know his first name and there getting married. She can only describe him as tall dark and slender and that’s it. I went and asked the local barkeeper about him and he said Mr Fox barely drunk anything there and he said he was quite moody. So all of this just makes me think this guy is really suspicious.       

My character felt Lady Mary shouldn't go out with Mr Fox. I would saw this quietly like I was trying to keep it a secret from Lady Mary.my character would also be fidgeting about on his seat like he was scared that Lady Mary was about to burst in.    

1 comment:

  1. + Nice effort and good understanding of a character's thoughts

    T Read the question carefully and think about how the answer should be written. This question was "as an actor" but you have written as the character. This should be reflective not creative writing!

    L Delete the question bore posting!

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