autumn 2 assessment

i have controlled my pitch and voice to play my role and i have con sidered thec auidiences view line

Little Scarlett 2 “Creative Writing”

Little Scarlett 2 “Creative Writing”

Police officer: At seventeen hundred hours police stormed the property inhabited by “the black hand gang”. The gang possessed a mini semi-automatic machine gun and four defence grenades. The police had double this fire power possessing 7 rifles. A battle took place in the front room of the property. Officer Brown was mugged at 17:03 by the opposing gang member identified as Mike Rand who was an ex armed forces member after he took several shots to the body. Officer Cofty and Officer Jones were severely injured after being caught in the blast of one of the grenades which also collapsed one of the walls of the property. Three of the five gang members were shot at 17:06 which gave cover for Officer Lawson the get behind the remaining two members of the gang. These two were arrested for possession of dangerous weapons and drug trading. At 17:35 police forces found Scarlet and her grandmother after a police dog picked up on a scent trail which lead to a van where a faint metallic clanging could be heard from. Police opened the back doors with a crowbar to discover Scarlett and her grandmother gagged and taped to the wall. A box containing further weapons possessing harm was found which contained a kg of ammo and a knife. Scarlet and her grandmother were released unharmed with only a formal warning to Scarlett’s mother.